Review: Zero No Mono Code 2

Zero No Mono Code 2 by (??)

(ゼロのモノCode2) by (??)

Translated by: ??

This is a review I’m not going to spend too long on. It’s worth mentioning this one because it is definitely NTR, and the NTR fan is likely to come across it. But in the other hand, it is a doujinshi, and in this case that made the difference.

Doujinshi are not bad by default. But sometimes they rely way too much on knowing the original story in order to follow what’s going on. Great if you know the original. But I look at all these stories just as independent NTR stories.

In this one, it was very border line. I’ve seen some NTR doujinshi where there was so much stuff that made no sense that I can’t even bother to review it. This one had potential, to make it worth mentioning, but it just barely missed the mark somehow.

A quick run down: It opens up with Lelouch (what is with the fucked up names these characters sometimes have?) getting a solid blowjob from his girlfriend C.C. (who is a witch or something) . He cums on her face, then she suddenly takes off, leaving his dick hanging there. She left her phone behind, and he is suspicious enough about her sudden departure that he looks into her phone. What he discovers is what you are going to want to read this for, if you do want to read it.

Rating: 3/10

The other guy in the story, Suzaku, has some connection to Lelouch, but I didn’t really get it, and I just couldn’t find it in me to care. Like I said at the beginning, if you don’t follow the original manga, you just don’t have enough here in this story to really understand or care about the characters. Almost, but only almost.

One thing I will say for this doujinshi is that the art is very solid. You might want to check it out just for the opening blowjob scene alone. Very effective use of the see-through effect so you can see the cock going deep into her throat.

As a hentai manga it’s pretty good. If you know the original story, you may love this. But otherwise the low marks are because there really isn’t enough substance for the NTR connoisseur.

Old Apartment of Temptation

Old Apartment of Temptation by Star of Dragon (Hoshino Ryuichi)

(誘惑の年上アパート) by (星野竜一)

I have been looking forward to this for a while, and it turned out to be as good I expected!

Yusuke heads over to see his girlfriend, Yurie, to surprise her for their 3rd year anniversary of them being boyfriend and girlfriend. She’s late from getting back from her job, though, so he decides to hide on the balcony to surprise her. But it’s him who gets a surprise.

This is part 7 of a longer story that has been appearing in Angel Club magazine (ANGEL倶楽部), but I’ve looked at earlier chapters and I’m not sure they have worthwhile NTR content. The story continues, though, so I’ll try to keep an eye on it if I can. (I can’t always get access to all the manga I want, so if you can provide chapters that are NTR and I can translate, please help me out!)

But in the meantime, enjoy this as a very effective, sweet little NTR one-shot!

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Translation notes:

1. This translation actually went pretty smoothly. Nothing too complicated. I did, as is my usual way, take the liberty of translating more for feel than accuracy. For example, “Go without a fuss” instead of the more literal “leave in a calm manner”.

2. “Mr Asami” is actually “Asami Sempai” in the original Japanese. “Sempai” is a way of saying someone is your superior, like your manager at work, or maybe just older enough to merit respect. In terms of language and appellations, they can be pretty particular about fine degrees of status in Japan. But it doesn’t really translate into rigid rules of behaviour. In a situation like between Yurie and Asami, she’s doing what he says because she wants his cock, not because of any subtle cultural rules. So I opted to go with “Mr” instead of leaving in “Senpai”, since “Senpai” might blur that distinction. Although, some might say that she is deliberately using “Senpai” in order to take blame off of herself by respecting a superior’s wishes. They do all sorts of  hierarchy games like that in Japan. But then we get down to my main principle, which is that readers who are from an English based culture want to go along for the ride and not be distracted by subtleties of Japanese culture that are vague and don’t really impact the story anyway.

3. “Asami” is often a woman’s first name, but can also be a last name, as it is here. Also, I thought you might like to know that the kanji used can also be used to mean “shallow” or “superficial”, which kind of implies that the guy who is fucking Yurie is kind of shallow.

4. “Yurie”, for those who might not be total Japanophiles, is pronounced “Yuri-eh”, not “Yu-ree”.

5. It was such a relief to not have to deal with too many sound effects! And I only added notes to the ones that I felt added something by saying what they were, not every last little one.

Review: Wednesday After School

Wednesday After School by Ameno Ameno

(水曜日の放課後) by (天野雨乃)

Translated and Edited by: Sayo

Commissioned by: Jink

This is a classic NTR manga that has been floating around the interwebs for at least a little while. For as long as I’ve known about NTR manga, which isn’t that long, really. But most fans of NTR are probably already aware of it.

For those who don’t already know it, it’s well worth getting, not just as a great NTR story, but also as a good model of what elements a story needs to be rage making NTR in general.

The story is pretty short, so there’s not a lot to describe. Sakai is a high school student who has been seeing Nagisa for some time, though we’re not told how long. Their relationship is the kind of classic innocent relationship young teenagers have before sex becomes a part of adult life. They meet after school, maybe daily, and hide together in some gym equipment room, and read magazines together and maybe kiss.

We know they don’t go as far as having sex because at the beginning of this story, Sakai gets a little too excited and starts to push to go further with Sakai. But she gets immediately uncomfortable and tells him to stop, then soon leaves.

The next day, she doesn’t show up at their usual meeting place and time, and Sakai beats himself up for having pushed too far. He gets a call from her apologizing for not being there. It all seems like the kind of misunderstanding that would be typical between a boy who is developing stronger urges and a girl who is unsure if she is ready.

Just after Sakai hangs up, he hears someone coming. Of course, it turns out to be Nagisa with someone else. That’s when Sakai finds out, the hard way, that Nagisa has different reasons for not wanting to have sex with Sakai than the innocent reasions he thought. From there, the knife gets twisted into Sakai’s heart all the more with what he sees and hears, and it’s what you’re going to want to read.

Rating: 9/10

The art is something that I’m going to stay objective about. It’s good, technically skilled art. But it’s a more realistic style than I like. I like more exaggerated art, where the women have huge tits and that kind of thing. But I know some people like the more realistic stuff, so I didn’t judge one way or the other on the art. We can all agree it’s well drawn.

The story is excellent, though. Like I said, it has elements that newcomers to NTR should look to as an example. Let’s take a look at what those elements are:

The girl is two-faced. In some NTR where the girl is raped, as a reader you can forgive her because she didn’t have a choice. But in a manga like this, it’s rage making because she is choosing to fuck the other guy. In this story her two faced nature is particularly well done, because she’s not just arbitrarily lying because she’s a mean person, she has different feelings for different guys that have consequences she struggles to cope with.

We get to see and feel for the main male character. Some semi-NTR stories will have the woman saying things while fucking a guy, like “You’re better than my husband”, but if we never see the husband, it lacks any impact. In a story like this, where we are suffering alongside the main guy, we feel every hurtful thing she says all that much more.

The main male character is basically an okay guy. If the guy who originally is with the girl is a jerk or something, then it seems like he might deserve it. A character like Sakai doesn’t deserve what’s happening to him, which makes it hurt for both him and the reader that much more. More hurt means more rage. I think that this is maybe core to good NTR: The situation has to be unfair.

The ending is bad. Another crucial part to any good NTR story. I personally like it when we see the woman hurt the guy deliberately, by telling him or showing him. But stories like this, where the ending is such that there is no confrontation, but the main male character is from now on living with the hurt of knowing in some way or another, is equally devastating.

Since this story is such a classic example, why only 9 out of 10? I think as I rate these stories, I’m finding out I’m the kind of guy who is always leaving a little room for more. There really isn’t anything wrong with this story technically, but it is a little simple. With a slightly longer story, or with more details that could make it even more hurtful.

In any case, this is NTR-101 required reading.

Extra note: There is a sequel to this, called “Friday’s Extra-Curricular Lesson“. It is not recommended, at least, not on an NTR basis. I won’t say what happens specifically, because I don’t want to ruin any imagery you might have from the first part of the story. But you should know that the focus is on the increasing depravity of the girl, and Sakai is removed from the situation in  a way that will reduce the rage. Plus, this chapter of the story has some very explicit scat. Not for the squeamish.

My recommendation for the NTR fan is to read Wednesday After School and pretend there are no sequels.

Review: Newlywed Gang Attack (parts 1 and 2)

Newlywed Gang Attack (parts 1 and 2) by Yukio Yukimino

(Newlywed Gang Attack)by (雪見野 ユキオ)

Translated by: Redlight Manga

These are two chapters from a collection called Bombshell Boobies. The rest of the collection is not NTR related.

Taguchi is a teacher at a school who is in his forties or fifties or so. He’s just married Natsuumi, who is 24 years younger than him. He met her through an arranged marriage, but it’s not like she was forced or anything. We get a sense that they have a genuinely affectionate marriage, there’s nothing complicated or secret about it. Taguchi is certainly very happy about it, saying that “Spring has finally come” to him.

It’s his work life that sucks. He teaches some pretty rough students who are always fucking with him. It’s not said outright, so we don’t know if the students are late high school or early college or what. I’m going to go with high school.

Three students have called Natsuumi and asked if they can come over, and she said yes, not realizing that Taguchi would rather not ever see them.

They come over for dinner, immediately begin teasing Taguchi and Natsuumi about wanting to fuck her. Then things escalate, and they throw Taguchi into the bathroom and lock him up while they get ready to rape Natsuumi.

And after that is the twist that I won’t spoil for you. All I can say is I certainly didn’t see it coming. Don’t worry, it doesn’t go into fantasy or anything. It’s just… well… read it for yourself.

Rating: 4/10

I actually really like the art in this. It’s a little 80s, but in a good way. As far as the story goes, the premise of the husband being forced to hear his wife fucking three guys while locked in the bathroom is a good one. And of course the wife says some pretty harsh things about her husband with makes it NTR and not just a rape.

And so why such a low mark? First, there’s the twist that I don’t want to give away because I think it would ruin the story for you. What I can say is that it’s kind of done more for being funny than anything else, and being funny and causing rage kind of don’t go that well together.

But the worst part is that the ending. There isn’t one, really. There’s real opportunity for Taguchi to be crushed NTR style… but he takes it sort of casually. He just kind of says “Oh well, I guess my honeymoon is over” while listening through the bathroom door. The whole thing is done in kind of  light hearted way, like a goofy comedy, so there’s no real emotion, and no real rage.

I think I can recommend this, and the rest of the collection (I think the cover drawing is really sexy, especially the way the tits are drawn), if you are into hentai manga in general. But for the fan of NTR who is looking for the real deal, you might want to give this a miss because it promises a lot but doesn’t deliver.

Review: To Love Hittora Buhi

To Love Hittori Buhi by ??

(To Love とらぶひっ) by (??)

Translated and edited by: Desu Desu

Let’s just start right off by saying I hate the art in this one. Just hate it. It screams out amateur in all the wrong ways. The cartoonish genitalia is gross, and not in a SM-ish, deliberately-gross-to-fuck-with-you way, but in an the-artist-doesn’t-know-how-to-draw-so-everything-looks-disgusting kind of way.

With that said, it’s too bad the art is such total shit, because the potential is there for some decent NTR. This has all the elements of being based on some other manga, which, as I’ve said before, I don’t know – and don’t care to know – about. Everything I know is in this NTR episode.

We start out with Rito getting a DVD from his girlfriend, Lala. Well, we actually start out with one panel of Lala saying she wants to become the girl Rito wants, and then suddenly it’s three day’s later. You can tell that the person who wrote it was kind of impatient to get to the naked tits.

And that’s what happens. The story pretty much jumps right into everything, so there’s no real suspense or anything that could be spoiled by telling you here. On the DVD is Lala fucking another guy named “Pigboy”. This is one of those deals where the guy stealing the girlfriend is portrayed as an absolute disgusting mess of a man, which for some people makes the whole situation sting that much more.

Rito knows he’s supposed to save her, but he can’t help but spank off while watching the video.

And it goes on from there. There’s a bit of scat in the middle of fucking Lala, but just a panel or two.

Then we get another chapter, where another girl named Haruna is tied up and fucked by both Lala and Pigboy. And another woman who seems to live with Rito at first bitches him out for spending all his time watching porn, then she is also made into Pigboy’s sex slave (with a hint that Lala beat the shit out of her in order to get her to submit). Like I said, there are no real surprises or anything, but you don’t want me telling you the whole story, so if you’re interested, you can read how it all turns out.

Rating: 2/10

Not only can I not get past the shitty art, the whole thing is done in a ham-fisted way that lacks any real emotional connection. I think because Rito starts masturbating first, and then is upset later, which to me seems like the wrong way round. It’s hard to really get sympathetic to him.

Throughout the story, he makes a half assed attempt to find and save the girls, but even while doing it he says he isn’t trying because he likes watching them get banged. And the end seems to imply that he has given up on the girls and even likes the fact that they have been reduced to some guy’s fuck toys, which takes the impact out of the fact that he had his girlfriend and other girls he liked taken from him.

The only reason I gave it two points was because of two essential elements that could have potentially made a great NTR story. One is helplessly watching his girlfriend get fucked on DVD while she says some harsh NTR things into the camera. The other is that had it ended before the epilogue, right when the girls say goodbye via DVD, that would have been a fantastic NTR bad-ending. I particularly like this parting line from Lala:

“After all, you’re masturbating to us right now, even as we speak, right?”

Ouch!

I can only recommend this one as inspiration for your own ideas about how it could have been so much better.

Review: New Wife-San

New Wife-San by Studio Wallaby

(新妻さん) by (Studio Wallaby)

Translated by: Little White Butterflies

Misoru is really, really horny. And she really wants to fuck her husband. But he’s away at work a lot. The opening scene is her and her husband fucking, and she seems to be doing a pretty good job keeping him satisfied. He whines a little bit about having to work, but she shuts him up by fucking him until he’s exhausted.

The next day, or whenever it is that he’s gone, she’s immediately unsatisfied. That’s when the express delivery guy shows up at the door with a package for her. Does she immediately fuck the delivery guy? You’d think so, but you would be thinking way to simply for this story.

It gets weird, with all this back story about being hypnotized, and her sister giving her a house, and having dreams about being raped by tentacles, and wanting to be trained to have sex with her husband… it’s complicated, and not really all that interesting, frankly.

Bottom line is that the delivery guy and two of his friends had been fucking her and hypnotizing her before the marriage, and they want to keep going with gang banging her all the time because they especially like fucking her. As opposed, I assume, to all the other women they do this to.

She resists at first, but as mentioned, she is way fucking horny, and her husband just can’t satisfy her the way three guys fucking the shit out of her can. They really go to town on her, and it’s what makes the story worth reading.

Rating: 5/10

On the plus side, the art and sex are worth getting this for. On the down side, while we get to know the husband at the beginning to build up sympathy, we don’t get his reaction at the end.

At least we get the impression that she is going to continue her constant gang bangs every chance she gets when her husband is away, so that’s good. And I personally love scenes where the cheating woman is being fucked while on the phone with the guy she is cheating on. I like it both when the victim knows and when they don’t know.

But I could have done with way less back story about how Misoru came to be a sex slave, and more story about what her life with her husband is like now that she has settled into getting three cocks in her every time her husband’s back is turned.

Last note, there is at least a hint of scat on one panel. A dude is pissing into her open mouth, as part of her sex slave training. And there are things around her which suggest even more happened to her. If you hate absolutely any kind of scat, you have been warned. For me, it was fine and didn’t impact my rating.

Review: Steel Heroines Vol.1

Steel Heroines by Youkai Tamanokoshi

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Translated by: Brolen

Edited by: Faytear

This is one of those doujin deals, where it is based on characters from a manga, or anime, or game, or something. Or, in other words, it has a whole lot of back story from the original story that I just don’t give the slightest shit about.

I don’t mean that in the sense that I think there’s anything wrong with using established characters for NTR stories. In fact, because NTR is so heavily based on the characters and plot, having all that back story can add a lot of much needed depth. If you really want to see a character from some bizarro pokemon universe have his girlfriend stolen, then you’re all set. All the better for you.

But with me, I don’t read the more science fiction or fantasy style manga, and so what I mean is that all the extra information is lost on me. Result is that I just take the story as it is, completely contained within this one NTR episode.

And that means there’s a level of it being vague that I just put up with. They are on some kind of space ship… maybe… and they are fighting a war… maybe… and the characters are soldiers… maybe.

All that out of the way, this one stands up pretty well. There isn’t a lot of plot development, all the story is revealed through dialogue the heroine has with the not-clearly-seen-guy she’s fucking. And it’s pretty awesome sex. The art is great.

As they fuck and talk, we learn that she has some boyfriend, and that she has been cheating on that boyfriend with not-seen-except-his-dick-guy for a while. But she feels guilty and kind of wants to stop, but can’t help it because she loves this guy’s dick so much.

In the middle, hidden-except-for-his-amazing-dick-guy reveals that this particular time they’ve been fucking, he has a camera set up. He tells her to use her telepathic powers (… uh, sure – OK…) to figure out who is on the other side of the camera. It turns out to be her boyfriend, tied up and forced to watch.

From there, she goes on to say some pretty harsh NTR things, which I always enjoy. And maybe you will too.

Rating: 6/10

Extra point for the art.

I scored it lower not because I didn’t know the back story, but because the whole moment when we see the boyfriend tied up and watching was totally thrown away. There he is forced to watch his girlfriend fuck another guy and hear her talk freely about how she loves this other guy’s dick more, and we don’t spend any time at all with his reaction. Hell, we barely even know what his reaction is. Anger? Sadness? Rage? Helplessness?

If he hadn’t been gagged, it would have been an excellent opportunity to watch an NTR victim be devastated emotionally. Kind of a waste.

Oh, and they go on at length about her getting pregnant. Which I find tedious. But I know a lot of people dig it, so I didn’t factor that into the rating.

Review: Male and Female Crossing / Zettai Rennai Shugi

Male And Female Crossing, and Zettai Rennai Shugi by Otsuka Kotora

(交差する雄と雌、絶対恋愛主義) by (大塚小虎)

This is a fantastic NTR story. Maybe the best one in my opinion. Note that part one was actually written after part two, as a “prequel”, but I describe the story in this review as it happens chronologically. You should get both and read them together.

Part one sets the stage. Kenji is married to Haruka, and he wants to try some wife swapping. It doesn’t seem to be the case that he is unhappy with Haruka, he just feels the need to add more spice to the marriage. Haruka is not into it, but reluctantly agrees because she can see that it’s the kind of issue that won’t go away unless they try to do at least something.

(There’s also some vague back story about her being so loyal to him because he protected her from her boss… but we don’t know what happened. Maybe it’s part of another story or something?)

Kenji hooks up with another couple through a co worker, and from the way the guy in the other couple is drawn, the reader can tell right away that he’s bad news. His eyes literally glow with pupil-less evil.

But despite some hesitation, Kenji and Haruka follow through, and then that’s when the first cracks appear. We learn that the other couple isn’t just there to swing. Mr-Obviously-Evil has got his pupil-less eyes on Haruka, and his almost-but-not-quite-as-evil-wife is his willing pawn. You’ll want to read for yourself how it goes down, so I’ll just say we get some very nice hints of the NTR developing.

Part two is where it hits the fan, and it is awesome. It’s a few months after part one, and though we don’t really see too much of how their relationship has been, it seems that both Haruka and Kenji have moved on from the swapping experience. They’re back to normal, everyday, married life.

The story begins with Haruka taking off to meet her friends, and Kenji thinks to himself that she always hangs out with her friends on Sunday and is gone for a long time. Even the newcomer fan to NTR can see what that means right away.

The story gets going when the wife of Mr-Holy-Fuck-How-Could-You-Not-Tell-I-Was-Evil shows up to speak to Kenji. She has a surprise for him, and it is devastating.

It’s what you’re going to want to read this story for.

Rating: 9/10

Almost perfect. The only reason I didn’t give full marks is that the story seems incomplete, which, in a way, is me whining that there should be more. But in actuality, near the end there’s a hint by what the other woman says that implies a bigger game going on.

Also, Mr-It’s-Ridiculous-How-Obviously-Evil-I’m-Drawn does some blabbing about making Haruka pregnant, and I find family planning talk in the middle of sex to be kind of a turn off. Some people seem to like it though, so if that’s your bag, then you’ll enjoy it.

Ultimately, the rage quotient is way high. The ending is real bad. There’s no going back, and the way they throw it in the face of Kenji is rage-pain at it’s best.

“It’s gonna hurt like a sonofabitch…”

This isn’t manga or anything, but, as they say on 4chan, “highly relevant to my interests”. Thought the NTR fans might find this as amusing as I did.

(…by Bob-Rz)

Review: Chapter 5 of Shinzui

(NOTE: This is NOT translated by Ragemanga. Please see “Other English NTR Manga” for details)

Chapter 5 of Shinzui by Nao Kokonoki

(？？) by (ここのき奈緒)

Translated by Brolen

Edited by DesuDesu

There’s a lot that I don’t know about where this manga is from. From what I gathered on DesuDesu’s blog, it’s the fifth chapter of some collection, so there might be more story, there might not be… it doesn’t really matter.

There’s some implied back story which doesn’t come out too clearly, but here it is: Saeko has been married a while, but before that she was into being a sex slave of some kind. Now, she’s writing about it on some web site where people can upload anonymous confessions.

It turns out, though, that her brother in law is the web master of said site, and he has figured out what she has been writing and what she’s into. She’s given up the sex slave life for being a regular house wife, and he realizes that maybe she’s missing the old lifestyle.

So he grabs her tits and fucks her ass as soon as her husband leaves for work. And when I say he fucks her ass, I mean he really gets down to business. This little NTR story is tailor made for those of you who like anal action.

The ending is one of the different variations of bad-ending-NTR that I like. The cheating continues, the husband is no wiser.

Rating: 6/10

Kind of simple, which is fine. If I were a huge fan of anal, I might have scored it more. So if anal is a big deal for you, maybe add a point or two to the score. The writing is a little vague (which I think is the fault of the original text, not the translator) which lessens the impact of her betraying her husband.

Decent art. Overall, worth reading, but keep your expectations kind of medium.